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Chocolate Chip Mint Icecream |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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Chocolate Chip Mint Icecream All alone tonight Indulging myself within the bits of chocolate My thoughts roam to you Wondering if you're alone too Sitting there rocking Back and forth Longing for some release And some comfort Found within chocolate Or even a sugar coated hug From a dear friend Who will share their chocolate chip mint ice cream and their unconditional love... [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (02-04-2002 06:58 PM).] |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
nothing better than calorie fests for those depressing nights....heres a sugar coated hug from me.... ~LCBS |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
Mwahaha! Chocolate chip mint icecream....mmm...stop it Kris, you're gonna make me go on a kitchen raid. I tell ya...sometimes I could really use a bowl of that stuff. -Adam "If life is so significant, then why do we die?" |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
Longing for someone like Chocolate Chip Mint icecream? That's a new one...but it gets the image across! Great good! *looks at school clock* Now I'm REALLY waiting for lunchtime... Others are too in love with the sound of their own voice to speak the truth... |
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aaron woodside Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 256 |
This is really nice. I liked the use of ice cream.  Sometimes I think I should just keep gallons of the stuff in my freezer. Sigh...Great write! ex animo, Aaron There are no great men, only men in great circumstances. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Im convinced this is why ice cream was created..to help a sore heart  Indulge my friend!!!BoOsH bOoSh nApoLE |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
 Wonderfully done! LMAO... I love it, I love it. How true, no? The length was perfect, the imagery great.... anotehr 5-star piece. Lovely. Titus Let the music set you free. |
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