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Don't Let Go
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Don't Let Go |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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Your arms around my waist they make me wish you'd never move from the position that we're in. Swaying back and forth on the dance floor the music sucks and it makes me laugh you came and found me and asked me to dance. I've never seen you wear a tie before and if you wear one again I think I'll burst out laughing. There's people all around us but we're seperated from the group swaying back and forth in circles. My head rests on your shoulder You talk to me and tell me about a song you'll have to play for me someday. Your arms around my waist they make me wish you'd never move from the position that we're in. I feel safe where I am I've never felt like that before and I don't want you to let go. Don't let go. The song ends but you don't pull away until the beats of the next song begin. You slowly slide away from me and I can't move; for once I'm stuck. I want you to come back to me. Don't let go. Don't let your mind wander, it's much to small to be out by itself. |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
This is great! If only he hadn't let go.... Guys (including, but not limited to myself) never know what they are letting go of. Great poem! After Love comes Pain, then Love, Then Pain, then Love, then Pain..... does anyone else see a pattern here? Oh well, can't say it's not worth it. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Aww this was such a cute poem hun!!! I know how it feels to be in such a secure place and you never wanna be let go...  BoOsH bOoSh nApoLE |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Bravo!  A very enoyable read here, my friend! I loved it. Great rythm and spacing... Good one. Let the music set you free. |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Thanks everyone!  Don't let your mind wander, it's much to small to be out by itself. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
are these actual events Allysa come on now, is this about J again? I hope not, for your own sake girl, when are you gonna be aim or yahoo again talk to you soon <-- we'll see là où est mon amour? |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Acire, no this isnt about Justin. That chapter in my life is over. This poem is for a guy named Mike that I'm quite fond of and they are actual events that did occur. He comes over for lunch sometimes and he plays guitar for me. It's rather fun. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
good to hear that but you didnt answer my other question là où est mon amour? |
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gymnast Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 80Scotland. |
I LOVED this poem! It's so sweet! I hope you two work out together. Keep Up The Good Wrok! |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
hey sis sup? i liked this its kinda neat. was this a basketball homecoming dance??? jw later Tis better to have loved and lost, then to have never loved at all... |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
This is a very sweet poem. I know those times you are speaking of when you don't want them to let go. Dawn |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Thanks everyone... Acire, the answer is I don't know. Other than that... later all. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
wooooo, do i sense some hostility in that answer? là où est mon amour? |
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Hot_black_angel16 New Member
since 2002-02-12
Posts 5CT, USA |
this I like this poem touched me. first-class poetry . can u look at what I am doing incorrect |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
No, actually, I'm at school right now and I'm not supposed to be on the computer, and I wasn't supposed to be on the computer yesterday..... so, yeah/ |
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