Teen Poetry #5 |
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Your Worst Enemy |
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PurplePeopleEater Junior Member
since 2002-01-04
Posts 11 |
this is my third poem. i actually like it better than the first but thats just me. here it is... Your Worst Enemy I saw your anger; I saw your pain Hurting people is how you gained These wounds you’ve caused will never heal I don’t see how you could ever feel This torture of all my thoughts Hell it seems, is all you brought I tried so hard to get to leave this madness All it brought was pain and sadness Screaming and crying is all I see Take all this pain away from me Lord I pray, I need you here I don’t want to live dying in fear Finding a way through this terrible fate Hoping to end it before it’s too late I want to leave; I want to go You have become my biggest foe Your mind has put you to the test You’ve accomplished it second best There is no sense in being calm The addiction has you in its palm Grasping your fear it tears you apart A new life for you is beginning to start You no longer have a say The fire will take you along the way |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Dont you hate people who hurt others to make themselves feel better This is great, and I can relate to it a lot Good job I was drowning in my own tears, until you threw me a life preserver |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
hey danimonkey this poem was indeed quite good, but i already told ya that. it's pretty cool that you are writing now, i don't feel like such a dumbass anymore lol. once again, pretty poem, and i am glad you r showing it to people on here. see ya. -bergundy- maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio- |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
hmmmmmmm....angry thoughts...anger PROVOKING thoughts at that. the guys sounds like an idiot if you dont mind my saying. ....vent more often. eyes...........feeel...D |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Wow, really good poem hun...this reminds me a lot of myself and how i use to feel almost all the time...nicely written and full of emotion.. BoOsH bOoSh nApoLE |
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