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Teen Poetry #5

Untouchable Darkness

Poet Unknown
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 140
Missouri

0 posted 2002-01-30 03:25 AM

Down in the hollow,
No more tomorrow.
Lived my life dramatically,
Changed suddenly drastically and traumatically.
Watching devouring souls way too young,
Finding a snitch cutting off his tongue.
People running and hiding,
Lunging and quickly striding.
Reach out beyond the shadows,
Snatch another soul return to the gallows.
A force not to be reckoned with,
You thought I was just a myth.
The depths of cold I bring are blistering,
Listen, listen to your soul whispering.
Crowds part as if my name were Moses,
Lay your hands upon me receive black roses.
Shooting poisonous darts,
Shipping souls off in carts.
Drifting back from the stars,
Waiting outside of the bars.
People running and hiding,
Lunging and quickly striding.
Reach out beyond the shadows,
Snatch another soul return to the gallows.
This is what it's like,
Unseen and deadly strike.
This is how it is,
To be known as a force,
Of Untouchable Darkness....

Do as you please....strike forth down upon your knees...Darkness Falls on Those Without Souls

gymnast
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since 2001-11-18

Posts 80
Scotland.

1 posted 2002-01-30 06:13 AM

I loved this poem! It makes you think alot and brings up a lot of images in my mind! GREAT work! Can't wait to hear more from you!

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

2 posted 2002-01-30 08:57 AM

Wow, I liked this one. Very intruiging. I don't see why it'd be blocked or what not??

Jenn

"You are the strength, that keeps me walking- you are the hope that keeps me trusting."

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2002-01-30 05:07 PM

Wow this poem was awesome, it had so much power and emotion in it!!! Awesome poem!

BoOsH bOoSh nApoLE

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2002-01-31 10:44 AM

...wow...

This was awesome. Definitely one going to my library. The descriptions you used were awesome. Very nice work.

--Marie

I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone.

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