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Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2002-01-26 01:39 PM

I finally allowed
My soul to give in
To sink in
To dive in
Within your intoxicating smile

I can't believe
The words I wrote
The words I scribbled
Upon the pieces of my tattered soul

It even blew my mind
Blew my heart
That I actually had the strength
To cry infront of you
To pour out my silent feelings
To confess that I cared for you
And that I needed you...

Kosetsu
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 450
Alabama, USA

1 posted 2002-01-26 01:45 PM

I liked this one Kris. It's shorter than your other ones, and a little less dark, but still good.

-Adam

"If life is so significant, then why do we die?"

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2002-01-26 10:56 PM

That takes a lot of strength to do what you did and im proud of you..its a break through u kno when you are able to show you feelings and not block them off...its a wonderful thing and im happy it finally has happened for you

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

3 posted 2002-01-27 06:42 PM

Sometimes it is a relief to tell someone how you feel about them and I kind of got the impression from this poem, well done and thank you for sharing

Zu

I wish I was a pigeon so that I could fly across the world

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2002-01-31 10:08 AM

"I can't believe
The words I wrote
The words I scribbled
Upon the pieces of my tattered soul"

Crying dries the insides

Hope you feel better now.
Enjoyed, as always.

--Marie

I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone.

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

5 posted 2002-01-31 03:23 PM

"I can't believe
The words I wrote
The words I scribbled
Upon the pieces of my tattered soul"

Beautiful words here, my friend.

I think I know what this one refers to. You desribed it well. Again, wonderfully done.

Hope to hear from you soon.

Sincerely,
Titus

"Outside of a dog, a book is man's best friend. And inside of a dog, it's too dark to read."
-Groucho Marx

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

6 posted 2002-01-31 05:31 PM

Powerful poem here... Doing that is one of the hardest things to do, isn't it? Congrats on doing it, and don't regret it. *hugs*

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