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Chrissy
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0 posted 2002-01-25 05:17 PM


How long will people search
To simply find what's inside
When will people stop looking to others
For what they should abide

Has it just never been said
That the truth is all around us
Or has everyone simply decided
That a professional opinions' a must

Has manking truly become so lazy
That we've given up all hope
Just because we've found it's easier
To be impressionable and barely cope

The answeres to life's questions
Aren't as hard as they may seem
I'm still learning them all myself
But it's no longer a nightmare, more so a dream

The easiest way to say It I guess
would be to look at it all like a child
With innocence and spimplicity
No so crazy, eratic, and wild

'Cause if you want to find it
Whatever your it may be
Good or bad it'll be there
Just use your heart and you will see

'Cause everything was given to us
When we were equiped with these bodies like so
Questions arose as we were made
So the answeres were installed...already being known

© Copyright 2002 Chrissy Ryen - All Rights Reserved
Jenabou
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1 posted 2002-01-25 05:56 PM


this was a wonderful piece
beautifully written, and I couldn't agree more

The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you.  Smile and it smiles, too
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

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2 posted 2002-01-26 04:15 PM


I really enjoyed the read, thank you for sharing this with us and I fully agree with your point.

Find me a problem a pigeon can't solve and I'll find you a pigeon to solve it.

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3 posted 2002-01-26 11:28 PM


This was a wonderful piece..it truely got me thinking a lot.thanks for sharing this with us!

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

Chrissy
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4 posted 2002-01-27 06:47 PM


Yeah, sometimes people need little thought or wrods, to make them really think about things.  Thanks guys, Im new to the "sharring" idea.  I write a lot, im just nervous about letting anyone else see what I write.  Your coments help a lot


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5 posted 2002-01-29 09:38 AM


beautifully done/well written poem
I'm very impressed with the content of the prayer
like a chinese fortune poem cookie
thanks for sharing and hoping to see more
keep em coming

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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6 posted 2002-01-31 10:32 AM


Chinese fortune poem cookie? Whatever, acire.
I really enjoyed this... these are hard questions you're asking.  If you ever find the answers, be sure to email me

Very well done.

--Marie

I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone.

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