Teen Poetry #5 |
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The Search for Serenity |
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Chrissy Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 81Idaho, no I am not a farmer! |
How long will people search To simply find what's inside When will people stop looking to others For what they should abide Has it just never been said That the truth is all around us Or has everyone simply decided That a professional opinions' a must Has manking truly become so lazy That we've given up all hope Just because we've found it's easier To be impressionable and barely cope The answeres to life's questions Aren't as hard as they may seem I'm still learning them all myself But it's no longer a nightmare, more so a dream The easiest way to say It I guess would be to look at it all like a child With innocence and spimplicity No so crazy, eratic, and wild 'Cause if you want to find it Whatever your it may be Good or bad it'll be there Just use your heart and you will see 'Cause everything was given to us When we were equiped with these bodies like so Questions arose as we were made So the answeres were installed...already being known |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
this was a wonderful piece beautifully written, and I couldn't agree more The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too |
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Marshalzu![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
![]() Find me a problem a pigeon can't solve and I'll find you a pigeon to solve it. |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was a wonderful piece..it truely got me thinking a lot.thanks for sharing this with us! yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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Chrissy Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 81Idaho, no I am not a farmer! |
Yeah, sometimes people need little thought or wrods, to make them really think about things. Thanks guys, Im new to the "sharring" idea. I write a lot, im just nervous about letting anyone else see what I write. Your coments help a lot |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
beautifully done/well written poem I'm very impressed with the content of the prayer like a chinese fortune poem cookie ![]() thanks for sharing and hoping to see more keep em coming là où est mon amour? |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Chinese fortune poem cookie? ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this... these are hard questions you're asking. If you ever find the answers, be sure to email me ![]() Very well done. --Marie I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone. |
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