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lone_poet707
Member

since 2001-11-17

Posts 70
black hole named Aylmer

0 posted 2002-01-25 12:45 PM

Shunned and counted last,
I stand alone again.
Rigid with their curses cast,
I cannot bear the pain.

But, I will not give in,
my inner strength will never fade.
I won't allow them to win,
of their malevolence i'll never be afraid.

I know they can't stop me,
nor will they drag me down.
Despite the depth of this murky sea,
I refuse to sink and drown.

I will ultimately rise,
a flaming phoenix in the night.
Gaze deeply into my shining eyes,
see the fire burning bright.

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

1 posted 2002-01-25 02:30 PM

I like this poem, sounds A LOT like something I would write, in a format I use as well. I think I posted a poem like that on here a while back.... WEll anyway, here is my belated greeting (I've been gone for a while) Welcome to Passions. Hope to read more.

After Love comes Pain, then Love, Then Pain, then Love, then Pain..... does anyone else see a pattern here? Oh well, can't say it's not worth it.

Jess_24
New Member

since 2002-01-25

Posts 5
Boone,Arkansas

2 posted 2002-01-25 06:28 PM

Wow. I love it. It has a lot of reality and strength. Great for teenagers today.

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

3 posted 2002-01-25 06:42 PM

I love it! Great job!

Find me a pidgeon that can solve my problems, and I'll find you a cat that can eat that pidgeon

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

4 posted 2002-01-26 12:43 PM

*Jaw drops to the ground* ohh that's my way of saying Welcome..well belated very belated I've been uhh..well caught up in stuff and such..but anywho..wow amazing read..and I'm not just saying that..I really enjoyed reading your words..it's kinda like the silver lining at the end of my dark day..or month or year..*shrugs* thanks

Kristen

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2002-01-26 12:53 PM

This was a really awesome write..thanks for sharing

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

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