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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180
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Everytime I fall in love It ends up with all this pain Always when future's looking brigth The sun is suddenly out of sigth I don't get used to it How many times must I go through this? How many times? It scares me That when I fall in love I get so naive Like I'm in a dreamworld With pretty,pink skies I get so very foolish I always belive My eyes are blinded I can't see It's always a shock When I get back to reality And then I'm down again Licking my scars, healing my hurts I try to get whole again Each time Is just as bad I don't feel like learn of it Cause I do the same mistake over again Falling in love - it always leaves me crying brings me too much pain I may be young, yet I'm already tired of it Tired of crying Tired of pain How many times must this happen? Will I learn? When will I grow and go on? Each time I get hurt I lose something inside A part of me Never healed Doesn't come back It's lost forever The hurt fades with time but it leaves an empty room A little black hole in my soul What's it worth, all this pain? Isn't it a kind of high-priced? What do I earn from it? What will I learn? Is this how I will grow? I am always myself. Isn't that enough for you? |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
good stuff I like it. it flowed well for the most part it did have some week spots but over all the poem was really good. we fall like the stars then rise like the sun..Repentence.Forgiveness.We are blame worthy hold us to our wrongs..but don't hold our wrongs against us |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
This was very nice. Your poems are so emotional. I guess that is why I like them so much! *Amanda* |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Great job, Zarina.  I ecspecially liked the line about licking your scars. That one really stood out for me. As far as learning and growing from all these heartaches- You are...You just don't realize it. ONE DAY Zarina...one day someone won't leave you heartbroken and you will see that it was all worth it. ( I know, Don't you just wish that damn day would hurry up? I know I do...  ) ANyway- I liked this alot.  |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well I personally grow from pain.....I dont know about you zarina. Anyhow, I enjoyed this. I hope things work out for you.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
indeed you grow from pain...this showed a lot of pain...i hope you find true love that wont hurt soon im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
It IS high priced, but just as Albert said, you grow from every hurt. Love is confusing... and everyone wonders if the pain and heartbreak is worth sujecting oneself to that. But in the end, it always is. It's that quote: "Should I cry because it's over, or smile because it happened?" Give that some thought *hugs* I know it hurts. But time will heal it. Stay strong. Wonderful work, here.--Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I've noticed that all your poems have shown such heart break and sadness. I just hope thing do get better for you. Just be strong cause it's on it's way. hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
This was great, except for all the sadness  . I hope everything turns out for the better."Right now I'm having amnesia and deja vu at the same time. I think I've forgotten this before." |
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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180 |
thanks alot. well, I know most my poems are dark..but Im okay don't worry!I am always myself. Isn't that enough for you? |
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