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BrokenAngel Member
since 2002-01-06
Posts 141Puryear, TN, USA 
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Silence A feather on the wind Silence The pain you have within Silence The love you have for someone Silence The hurt you get from that one Silence The darkness inside you Silence The truth about you ---Night Angel |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Beautifully written hun...well done  yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
If this is not a real sad one.... *sigh* Hurt by the one you love, and all you can do is keep mum??!! pure AGONY...  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Other then this line (The hurt you get from that one) I enjoyed it! That one line just stumbled me a bit. Well done my friend! Sincerely, Titus Smile, Jesus loves you. [This message has been edited by PoetryIsLife (01-19-2002 01:22 PM).] |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This says so much with so little... I really enjoyed this. Very beautifully written, but painful to read. I hope all is well.. maybe you should talk to the person? Anywho, good write. I enjoyed it. --Marie I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no one should ever feel this alone. |
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