navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #5 » Thank You
Teen Poetry #5
Post A Reply Post New Topic Thank You Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Pixie-Babe03
Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387
Central Maine

0 posted 2002-01-16 02:23 PM


Please excuse the lack of punctuation etc.  but this just came to me and i had to type it before it left!! *Justine*


Next time i meet up with you
i finally know what to say
I never thought it would come to this
but it hit me one day

Next time I meet up with you
I know just what to do
I will look you straight in the eye
and firmly say “thank you”

Thank you for causing me
to be in so much pain
thank you for making
my tears fall like rain

for I became a better person
because of this strife
and I will remember this
for the rest of my life

this is that last thing I thought I’d say
but I have come to see
I am a better person
because of the way you hurt me.


-=Love starts with a SMILE, grows with a KISS, and ends with a TEAR=-

[This message has been edited by Pixie-Babe03 (01-16-2002 02:24 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Justine - All Rights Reserved
Kosetsu
Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450
Alabama, USA
1 posted 2002-01-16 02:24 PM


Damn straight. The biggest payback you can give to someone that hurt you is to thank them for it.

Woo.
-Adam

"I like pigs. Dogs look up at us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals." - Winston Churchill

Shygirl82
Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245
Ilinois
2 posted 2002-01-16 05:09 PM


Wow...you put my feelings into a poem..very excellent.  I am very much feeling you on this one.  I say go for it..I did and I felt ALOT better...good luck...
~Nikki~

Smile!!  You never know who may be falling in love with it...

Pixie-Babe03
Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387
Central Maine
3 posted 2002-01-16 06:20 PM


thank you guys!  it has been a long time since we broke up but i am just now realizing that it really was for the best and i have changed for the better   i just hope i get the chance to thank him!! lol
*Justine*

Acies
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665
Twilight Zone
4 posted 2002-01-16 07:05 PM


You Go Girl


là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

[This message has been edited by acire (01-16-2002 07:06 PM).]

Pixie-Babe03
Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387
Central Maine
5 posted 2002-01-16 07:22 PM


LMAO!!! Acire you are freakin awesome!
Lil_Angel123
Junior Member
since 2001-12-16
Posts 13

6 posted 2002-01-16 07:31 PM


Hey thats right about how you feel! That poem shows alot of feelings in it. Thanks for posting it and i hope that you post more that show just as much feeling. Even though you just thought that up and wrote it it was still good!Anywayz, post on!
~Amanda~

Suga_Baby
Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380
Maine, USA
7 posted 2002-01-16 08:04 PM


Freaking thing... I just typed this big long thing and after I hit SUBMIT it tells me my password is wrong and I have to do it all over... unfortunately, I have NO idea what I just WROTE other than your poem is awesome, as are all of them!! Kick his ass!! Hmmm what else... oh I said I only have one thing to say to my ex: "ChickenCow? What in HELL was I DOING with you!?" haha woooo fun... anyways, I also said that ummm... shoot. Oh! That I can't wait for cheering to be over so we can hang out during the week! I miss my Teenie!!! If you need help studying for your chem exam, you know who to call Oove you Teenie!!

,
Beanie

"A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep."

xShUgArHiGhx
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
8 posted 2002-01-16 09:53 PM


::* I thank everyone that has caused me to suffer. Without you, I would have no reason to express myself. *::

That quote reminded me a lot of the poem you wrote...thank god you go all of the words out before u forgot them because this was an awesome poem!

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

Fading Away
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia
9 posted 2002-01-16 09:55 PM


It's amazing how much a simple "thank you" holds...

Wonderful work... I enjoyed this

--Marie

'Things are getting worse but I feel a lot better... and that's all that really matters to me.'

Mon Cherie
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers
10 posted 2002-01-17 12:26 PM


Justine, I felt like crying after reading your poem coz I have someone I'd like to thank in that same capacity.

But then, thank YOU for sharing this with all of us... Thank you so much... Now, I probably should think of how I'm going to thank......

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

Pixie-Babe03
Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387
Central Maine
11 posted 2002-01-17 04:15 PM


Mon Cherie-  isn't it strange finding yourself wanting to thank the person that hurt you so much?  big revelation for me, i know that much.  I hope you are able to thank the person you want to, good luck hun!
*Justine*

-=Love starts with a SMILE, grows with a KISS, and ends with a TEAR=-

Pixie-Babe03
Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387
Central Maine
12 posted 2002-01-17 04:18 PM


Sugarhigh- thanks you for the great reply(thank you everyone for the great replies it means a lot) and thank you for the awesome quote!  I am a big fan of quotes and i'm going to have to add that one to my collection!
*Justine*

Acies
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665
Twilight Zone
13 posted 2002-01-18 10:16 AM


hey Justine

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


xShUgArHiGhx
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
14 posted 2002-01-18 10:17 AM


I'm  glad you liked the quote hun!! Anytime

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

TigerZ
Member
since 2002-01-02
Posts 83
Ontario, Canada
15 posted 2002-01-18 07:50 PM


EXCELLENT!!!!  my gosh im so glad you got to write all that before you forget it was awesome!  like wow!  i dont know what else to say...absolutely wonderful!  *wild applause*

A life without love…is no life at all.

Pixie-Babe03
Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387
Central Maine
16 posted 2002-01-18 08:27 PM


HI ACIRE!!!! *giggles*

TigerZ- YAY! I'm glad you liked this so much!!!
*Justine*

-=Love starts with a SMILE, grows with a KISS, and ends with a TEAR=-

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #5 » Thank You

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary