Teen Poetry #5 |
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And I'll Survive |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding ![]() |
They say every cloud has a silver lining The darker the cloud the brighter the lining I've had my cloud, I've found my lining I can live again without worry Of the things that will hurt me or the Things that will kill me I've found my way out And I'll never return Life has not been kind to me But it's just life And I'll survive "Amy, can you PLEASE come to Spain with us so that we have someone to keep Rhonda calm?" - Mr. Ardiel *insert hysterical laughter from me here* |
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since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
The message to this poem is one I think every deserves to hear, Rhonda! VERY nice work. That's so very true. And whatever doesn't kill us makes us stronger, right? I enjoyed this. Beautiful work. --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
.....and that's just it ![]() ![]() |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Skyfire- this is great! ![]() you've penned a very important message here...life isn't always kind or fair, but with a positive attitude we will all survive.. ![]() wonderful job!! ![]() smiles, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great message in this...i liked the way you have written this...great job!...bye ![]() im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Marshalzu![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great work Skyfire a great piece of work and an enjoyable read ![]() Andrew |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Be strong...I see you already are. keep it up hi Sweets, Kris, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
this is really good! I like this!! thanks for sharing... I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed this and very glad to see a positive poem like this. I liked the message. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
*I will survive...Ooooh as long as I know how to love, I know I'll stay alive!!* Sorry about that. ![]() It's good to see you are being positive about this. Keep your head up and keep smiling. ![]() ~AF~ Just because I hear voices doesn't mean I'm crazy...SHUT UP IN THERE!!! |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Great write, Rhonda. I liked this. Such a wonderful message. |
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