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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I wrote this while watching a slide of nature pictures that my english teacher took..this is what i got out of it... Crisp cool air blows, As innocence is slowly corrupt. Everyday form, Became eloquent w/an artists touch. Simpleness and purity, Walked amist w/out a second glance. A breath taking view, Walked along in a trance. So much interpretation One plain thing takes exotic forms. You see something new, In something 1 million years old. A glance of truth, Speaks softly out through the shadows. Learned to appreciate more in a minute, Then i have in over a course of hours. Life's golden gems, Lay upon foresaken silver. The tranquility of life, Makes yet another fool of a believer. yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows [This message has been edited by xShUgArHiGhx (01-15-2002 01:33 PM).] |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Sometimes it's odd what gives us inspiration. Whether you meant it or not, I actually got a hell of a lot of meaning out this. Meaning = good.  Thank you so much for posting this. The only thing that I fear is to die quietly. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Well im glad Dark Thanks for reading!yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
*applause* This was beautiful, Michele... The images were breathtaking. I wish I could have seen those pictures, to have a taste of what you saw. (I love nature pictures). I really enjoyed this... It amazing me how you've grown as a poet in PIP. Keep em coming... --Marie I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no should ever feel this alone. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Thank u marie yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
OMG!!! *standing ovation* This is awesome work Michelle One thing though, type the word "with" that makes a poem better believe it or not awesome work, I'm glad I read this thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Im so glad that you enjoyed this acire!! Thanks for the helpful tip I always ponder over wether or not it makes a difference.. yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
it does là où est mon amour? |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Wow, you really got me into a reflective mood. Yes, it's true how our Mother Earth is so fascinating. Every life is a mystery, awaiting for us to find out more, and to observe. Hope our earth will stay green forever. _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
ahhhhhh ure getting so good!!! **You can't always trust the people you want to** |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
LOL Kiley THANK YOU!!yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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aaron woodside Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 256 |
I really liked the lines about "Seeing something new in something one million years old". It really puts things into perspective. Thanx for the wonderful read. ex animo, Aaron There are no great men, only men in great circumstances. |
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rubberband Junior Member
since 2002-01-04
Posts 26Will be half Swiss one day |
It is the truth.... Nature is such a beautiful thing.. If I had it my way I would live the rest of my life in the bush. Beautiful poem to go with a beautiful topic.. Rubberband  |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Well thank you very much guys yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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