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0 posted 2002-01-15 01:32 PM


I wrote this while watching a slide of nature pictures that my english teacher took..this is what i got out of it...

Crisp cool air blows,
As innocence is slowly corrupt.
Everyday form,
Became eloquent w/an artists touch.
Simpleness and purity,
Walked amist w/out a second glance.
A breath taking view,
Walked along in a trance.
So much interpretation
One plain thing takes exotic forms.
You see something new,
In something 1 million years old.
A glance of truth,
Speaks softly out through the shadows.
Learned to appreciate more in a minute,
Then i have in over a course of hours.
Life's golden gems,
Lay upon foresaken silver.
The tranquility of life,
Makes yet another fool of a believer.



yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

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1 posted 2002-01-15 04:33 PM


Sometimes it's odd what gives us inspiration. Whether you meant it or not, I actually got a hell of a lot of meaning out this. Meaning = good. Thank you so much for posting this.

The only thing that I fear is to die quietly.

Read between the lines.

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2 posted 2002-01-16 08:28 AM


Well im glad Dark Thanks for reading!

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

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3 posted 2002-01-17 01:25 PM


*applause*  This was beautiful, Michele... The images were breathtaking.  I wish I could have seen those pictures, to have a taste of what you saw.  (I love nature pictures).

I really enjoyed this... It amazing me how you've grown as a poet in PIP.  

Keep em coming...

--Marie

I wish your fingers could touch all I can't say... no should ever feel this alone.

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4 posted 2002-01-17 08:48 PM


Thank u marie

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

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5 posted 2002-01-18 10:20 AM


OMG!!!
*standing ovation*
This is awesome work Michelle
One thing though, type the word "with"
that makes a poem better believe it or not
awesome work, I'm glad I read this
thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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6 posted 2002-01-18 11:11 PM


Im so glad that you enjoyed this acire!! Thanks for the helpful tip I always ponder over wether or not it makes a difference..

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

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7 posted 2002-01-19 11:08 AM


it does

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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8 posted 2002-01-19 11:44 AM


Wow, you really got me into a reflective mood. Yes, it's true how our Mother Earth is so fascinating. Every life is a mystery, awaiting for us to find out more, and to observe. Hope our earth will stay green forever.

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9 posted 2002-01-21 05:26 PM


ahhhhhh ure getting so good!!!

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10 posted 2002-01-22 12:07 PM


LOL Kiley THANK YOU!!

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

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11 posted 2002-01-22 03:38 AM


I really liked the lines  about "Seeing something new in something one million years old".   It really puts things into perspective.  Thanx for the wonderful read.  

ex animo,
Aaron

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12 posted 2002-01-22 09:47 PM


It is the truth....  Nature is such a beautiful thing..  If I had it my way I would live the rest of my life in the bush.  Beautiful poem to go with a beautiful topic..

Rubberband

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13 posted 2002-01-22 11:24 PM


Well thank you very much guys

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

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