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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
a poem of motion For you, the girl who is poetry in motion possible only because she lends her motion to the poem. Even if Only if in the mind at first And in the physical sense later. On paper now and on flesh later on in the evening. |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
I hope that this one doesnt get locked or anything, I censored it a lot |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Beautiful poem!!! yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Hehe. It's really interesting!! A brilliant tribute to a lady who holds such high position in your heart.  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
Great poem! Poetry is spiritual ventilation! |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
well Im trying to get her into writing poetry too, I first got into it b/c a girlfriend of mine got me into it, but so far nothing is coming out. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
That was awesome! "possible only because she lends her motion to the poem." I really loved the approach you took with this. Very creative. I enjoyed this. Look forward to seeing more --Marie 'Things are getting worse but I feel a lot better... and that's all that really matters to me.' |
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