Teen Poetry #5 |
Have I told you... |
DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
You whom I call love Forever shall my heart Beat in union with yours For you are whom I call love You who my love runs deep For only you can my soul keep From falling into the pits below For my love strong for you My love, my love I have told you dear That of all my fear Lossing your love ranks up there My beautiful, My dearest My angel, my nearest have I told you I love you still? http://www.heisen.net Peace Through War, it is beginning! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
This is a really good poem...I especially like the part... My beautiful, My dearest My angel, my nearest have I told you I love you still? You got straight to the point!!! If you want something very badly, set it free. If it comes back to you, its yours forever, if it doesnt, it was never yours to begin with" |
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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
Thanks sweetie, it cheered me up, even if it was just for a bit... Love you |
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Lennon2002 Junior Member
since 2002-01-10
Posts 31The wV |
nice post What would you say I i said to you, its not in what you say, its in what you do? |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This is such a beautiful poem....kinda short but s your feelings strongly throughout. Great job!!!!! yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
OH... this is so sweet!!!! of coz, your love will know that you love her... Juz keep on telling her... _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
"...lately, that I love you." Good song. I really enjoyed this poem. Very sweet, and heartfelt, indeed. Made me think of good times So thanks for the trip down memory lane, and share more soon! --Marie "It was a long December, but there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows) |
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