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Teen Poetry #5

A Journey For Love

Ghost_014
New Member

since 2002-01-09

Posts 2

0 posted 2002-01-10 06:39 AM

streatching across the skies above
a single man searches for love
with his end drawing near
her glowing eyes relenquish his fear
his lifes journey will pass soon
for he and his love shall dance to the moon

Erin
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since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2002-01-10 04:58 PM

Welcome to Passions!!! I hope that you enjoy yourself here...

This is a really good poem here!!! Thanks for sharing it!!!

If you want something very badly, set it free. If it comes back to you, its yours forever, if it doesnt, it was never yours to begin with"

Domzi
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 288
New York (BK)

2 posted 2002-01-12 11:43 AM

Welcome to this family of poets!
Great first poem. I hope to see
many more.

Poetry is spiritual ventilation!

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

3 posted 2002-01-12 12:28 PM

I don't think I got to see your first post, but you have done a wonderful job here!

It's short and sweet, and it's about finding love.

Again, Welcome to Passions!!!

We invite you to share with us your poems, and your feelings.

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Florence

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2002-01-13 01:05 AM

Awww very cute and romatic poem

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

Barelybreathing
Junior Member

since 2000-04-26

Posts 46

5 posted 2002-01-14 03:43 PM

This is a great poem..keep on writing!

'The greatest thing in the world is to know how to be one's own.'
~Montaigne~

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

6 posted 2002-01-16 07:52 PM

Good job! Short, and concise. Very nice job.. I certainly enjoyed this. And look forward to more.

--Marie

'Things are getting worse but I feel a lot better... and that's all that really matters to me.'

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