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0 posted 2002-01-09 01:38 AM


Blue fingernails
Stare at me
As I write.

Blue fingernails
Oh so me
As I create.

Blue fingernails
Please catch me
As I fall.

Blue fingernails
Please love me
As I love you.
~*~Wrote this to Morgan as I was trying to write some deep, awesome poem that you guys would love. It's amazing what staring at your nail polish inspires you to write.

© Copyright 2002 Rhonda Adolph - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-09 01:46 PM


LoL this is actually really ironic because as i was sitting in Psychology last period i noticed someone across from me with long bright blue fingernails...lol I was looking at them the whole time...weird!

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

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2 posted 2002-01-09 10:50 PM


Hey---it's amazing what you can get from blue fingernails! With that in mind---I can say this was good! I liked the last stanza best!

The trick is to know when to walk away---and TO KNOW WHEN TO RUN!!!

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3 posted 2002-01-10 07:18 PM


LoLoLoL Very interesting Sky. Seriously, though, I enjoyed it. A nicely written, simple, but enjoyable read. As I've said, I love your work. Looking forward to the next!

Titus

PS: Sitting well, tonight? LMAO

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4 posted 2002-01-11 05:45 AM


Rhondadidi, are you sure it wasn't the fumes from the nail polish that inspired you to write this?

Blue is a great colour though.

Thankya for sharing this. As always, it was enjoyed.

~AF~

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5 posted 2002-01-13 01:18 AM


Skyfire, with half the things you stare at, I am SHOCK to find you not writing peoms about them!  But maybe the blue fingernails are better! *smiles wickedly to the thought*

Luv yah

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6 posted 2002-01-13 12:54 PM


This is so interesting!! I painted my nails baby blue just this morning! Great right, Rhonda!

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7 posted 2002-01-14 07:59 PM


I love blue nail polish!!!

Creative, indeed.

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