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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180
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I try to be strong Independent and tough I try to be careless I try to act like I dont see That I don't care what others think of me I throw my head back and laugh Try to rise above the mockers When my friends doesn't call me I tell myself it doesn't matter but I know it does... Inside Im Afraid I care so much About Everything Inside They hurt me with their words They stab me in the dark They laugh of my injuries I try to be proud Inside Im screaming, Im trembling, Im crying, Im stumbling.. Don't want to be uninvited I wish to be accepted In fact, I do care. My outside may seem cool I may laugh,smile, act like I don't care It's all a pretending Cause my inside is burning, screaming, freezing, trembling, gnawing, weeping... hurting. For how long can I go on? I don't know It's just like.. Somehow, I need to be loved. -*-* This is written a while ago. Im okey now..  Just tell me what you think of it..? *-*-"What do you mean? Do you wish me a good morning, or mean that it is a good morning whether I want it or not; or that you feel good on this morning; o [This message has been edited by zarina (edited 07-09-2001).] |
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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180 |
Oh, Im sorry about that **** thing.. Wasn't thinking. Sorry Sorry Sorry.. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
such strong/powerful words. You did a great job on this one. keep sharing hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
The poem I thought was very open and strong. A reflection of the strength within you..you can overcome it. You have it in your heart.. believe it in your mind.  Excellent poem. Be kind, be true, be bold, be you. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Yet another magnificent write, Zarina. Ya know I love your work. It's so easy to relate to...for me at least. This was in no way an exception. Till your next post....  |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. I liked this one.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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