Teen Poetry #5 |
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I Lost Him |
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inspiredpoetwriter Member
since 2002-01-05
Posts 104Minnesota |
January 4, 2002, 9:40 PM I Lost Him He broke my heart Let my soul fade away Like a painting Let me body drowned in tears. I lost him He hurt me a lot He left me without saying good bye He’s not here to protect me I only wanted him to stay by my Side forever. I lost him Time goes by I still wish I could tell him I miss him only I can tell him in my dreams In my thoughts. I lost him Tomorrow may give me Strength but I know I’ll never get over him And what we shared together One day I hope to wipe way These tears and bury This pain. I lost him. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
the memories will remain, but the tears will dry, and your heart will heal.....(((hugs))) sorry you are hurting right now ![]() |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Im sorry that you lost him hun ::hugs:: ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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BrokenAngel Member
since 2002-01-06
Posts 141Puryear, TN, USA |
I know how you feel baby doll. I've been in the same shoes. I love the poem, it really sums up the feeling. It will be ok, "if you love something, let it go, if it comes back to you it's yours, if it doesn't, it never was."(DMX) |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Awwww... yeah I feel this. ![]() That "drowned in tears" feeling. BLAH *sniffff nice work ![]() Jenn "You are the strength, that keeps me walking- you are the hope that keeps me trusting." |
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gymnast Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 80Scotland. |
I feel for you on this one! I totally know how you feel as it happened to me not long ago...but keep yer chin up, coz it will get better! ![]() ![]() |
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PoetryIsLife![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Wow; I enjoyed this piece, especially the ending. I hope you're doing a little bit better: day by day my friend. We're here for you. Good luck... Sincerely, Titus The One, The Only... The Titus. |
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