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you use to to tell me you loved me.
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you use to to tell me you loved me. |
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punkrockerrobin 
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV 
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you use to tell me you loved me. you would never leave me. but now i'm grown and you're not here. i'm almost 20 but you don't care. it's been nine years since i've seen you. you use to tell me you loved me. you use to tell me you loved me. but did you really? you HAD a title but you lost it. do you remeber what that title was? it was father. you use to tell me you loved me. you use to tell me you loved me. now that love is gone. there is nothing you can do to redeem it. i use to tell you I LOVED YOU. now i don't. you use to tell me you loved me. ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* you use to tell me you loved me. now that love is gone. it left when you left me. i don't hear the I LOVE YOU anymore. maybe it's a good thing i don't. i never heard you say you loved me. love me and rhonda for ti loves us! [This message has been edited by poeticgirl01 (01-04-2002 06:27 PM).] |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Awww hun...::hugs::...im not even shur what to say..this was so sad... ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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gymnast Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 80Scotland. |
This poem is really great. I'm sorry to hear about the way it worked out with your dad, I feel for you. But I really liked this poem so I hope you don't mind me adding ti to my library! |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
tks no i don't mind. scotland 'eh? do you like dropkick murhys? love me and rhonda for ti loves us! |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Wow I really enjoyed reading this, it is a wonderful peice of poetry *hugs* hope to see more soon  Andrew Join the Imperial Space Navy and become a Ti(tus) fighter. ;) |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
hey drew nice sig but what have you got against my titus? love me and rhonda for ti loves us! [This message has been edited by poeticgirl01 (01-04-2002 06:27 PM).] |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is so sad... a definite tear-jerker. I'm sorry that this happened to you. A very hard thing to deal with... but hang in there And keep writing about it. It helps. I enjoyed this. --Marie "It was a long December, but there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows) |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
This was sad...I'm so sorry that things are this way for you...I hope that the situation improves...  ~*Nikki*~ *~Fighting for your love~* |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Awwwies! Robin! *hug* This is sad.  I'm sorry this happened. But you know, actions speak louder than words, so if you know yourself, and you know your worth, no one needs to tell you that they love you because really, you're already loved by everyone, and that's something you should already know, ne? ^_^ *hug* Keep up the heart. ^^++ Leah ++ Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Ditto to Leah. Keep writing, it's like therapy...only YOu are the one skribbling away on the pad. tehehe Thanks for the read, continue posting! "I'd rather die purposely alone than to have lived an accidental life of solitude."- Jesa "§ùgã®" Thompson |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Aww... That's sad...  Great poem, though. Good Job. - Cody - |
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prov1717 Member
since 2001-12-26
Posts 74NE |
i feel for ya, good poem tho, i hope that you feel better. |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
The love of a parent is said to be the greatest thing in the world---once you've lost that...what've you got when you feel alone? It's important that you pull through from this...because when you do---you'll be stronger than the average joe out there! You'll know a sense of freedom, power, responsibility like none other...I'm still debating whether that's good or not---but you'll definetly stick out of a crowd. I know how you feel...and the fact is---all I've ever wanted from my father is ANY sort of love. And he's left me...my mother---and my life. This was really good! I honestly can say I enjoyed this ALOT!!! Thanks for sharing! The trick is to know when to walk away---and TO KNOW WHEN TO RUN!!! |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Aw, sweetie.... that's so sad and heartfelt. I wish things could be different for you. You seem to get the bad end of everything!  Great write though, not that my opinion matters, cause YOU'RE the only one whose opinion matters!You know you're Canadian when if something's broken, the first thing you ask is if it can be fixed with WD-40 or Duct Tape |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
tks everyone! i am holding my head up high and taking day by day! love me and rhonda for ti loves us! |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I agree with Jesa. Writing is like therapy. It just puts all of that junk out that you've been hiding in your heart...so it's not so cramped anymore, you know? It does wonders really... BUT I hope it doesn't work too well my major is in psych and I want you guys to need me!!! Nice poem Robin... Jenn "You are the strength, that keeps me walking- you are the hope that keeps me trusting." |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
lol jenn you know your always needed! love me and rhonda for ti loves us! |
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