Teen Poetry #5 |
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My hero |
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Lisa_bebe15 Member
since 2001-11-15
Posts 151Florida ![]() |
You are my hero I look up to you And respect you I come to you for advice And hope you will take me seriously I can come to you with problems You find answers for me And show me how to fix the problem I don’t have to say a word, but you know what I am going to say I can talk to you forever And you will just listen I come to you with open arms And I leave with one more hug I never had Someone hurts me you go hurt them Twice as hard as they hurt me You understand how I feel Like no one else does You dry my eyes When they are wet And helps me up onto my two feet I can't live without you Because my hero never leaves me Nor gives up on me You take me into your life with so much trust You care about me as a person And you don't treat me as I where a thing Hero’s never die That’s what you are my hero And will always be my best friend, My love, And my hero. "Water Over Matter" |
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prov1717 Member
since 2001-12-26
Posts 74NE |
great poem, i'm happy that you have this person in your life, make sure they see this, writing something down means so much bc you can keep it forever. well i like it and i look forward to seeing more of your poems. peace leslie |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Awwwwwwww this is such a great/cute/sweet poem!! I definately think you should give this to them...they'd love it im shur!!!! Nicely written poem ![]() ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Very touching poem it's really sweet and a great tribute to whoever your writting about. Keep up the awsome work I can't wait to read more. Lauren "I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Very sweet. He sounds like a good guy... keep him. Those kinds are rare ![]() Very sweet tribute, and well-written. I enjoyed this, and look forward to seeing more! --Marie If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway. |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
i liked this poem a lot! great work! robin repeat after me: punk is the best music ever created! |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
This is so sweet! Great job. Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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