Teen Poetry #5 |
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prov1717 Member
since 2001-12-26
Posts 74NE |
here it goes... why does it hurt so bad when you finally realize you need to change why does it dig so deep when you're ready to let go of the pain to finally realize you can't do it alone and to let go of the anger to let the hurt out and finally be willing to share to deal with the fact that you're not always right and thats ok to take pride in your true gifts and go on throughout the day to accept the fact that yeah you're hurt and its ok to cry to stop holding on to the past and learn to say goodbye when your bodys run down from all the running away when you finally tell yourself enoughs enough and your going to stay but why does it hurt so bad when you've decided to make that change when reality comes to haunt you and its like a slap in the face it hurts like the anger you've been hiding for so long you wipe the tears from your eyes and tell yourself you have to go on but why does it hurt so much to admit to people that you need to change especially the people that you love to no longer hide the hurt like old dust under the rug to let the real you come out and no longer hide behind something thats not really you to know that not everybody is going to like you no matter what you do so when your legs are growin weak from all the running you've done stop and think if its really worth it all the hurt and anger and pain you carry like luggage its all so right and you know you need to do it and learn to love but why if its all so right, does it hurt so much? |
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since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
"to deal with the fact that you're not always right and thats ok" That was a line I would love to tell many people... (ok, I needed to hear it too.) But this is a very well written poem. I see nothing that needs "ripping apart". The ending was perfect. Why do we feel pain, when we know should never have to? Very nicely written. I haven't seen much of your work around here, but I look forward to reading more! Nicely done. --Marie If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway. |
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prov1717 Member
since 2001-12-26
Posts 74NE |
thanks for your comment! i actually just joined last night ![]() leslie |
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