Teen Poetry #5 |
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Lonely Leprechaun On A Three Day Binge |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time ![]() |
Losing Only Now Even Losing You Lowest Epitome Perhaps Reality Annihilated Cold Hearted Adversaries Under Night skies Ongoing Notions Avoided Trodding Heavily Rejecting Every Emotion Damned And Yellow Bleeding Inside Now Gone Eternally " How can i feel if i can't breathe...?" |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This one seemed to be different from the format you usually use. I thought it was a nice change and i like it a lot ![]() ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
i liked this a lot, i am going to go find more of your poems ![]() |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
sweet set up. Not to mention a great poem to go with it. Nicely done! Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Very different approach. The subject was interesting... I enjoyed this. The one-word lines worked very well. Nicely done ![]() --Marie If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Hmm that's a different acrostic. I like it!!! The content of the piece itself is so dark it's quite enjoyable. ![]() Thanks for sharing it. Hope to see more soon. ~AF~ If this is all the world has to offer, I want a refund on my life. |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
i liked this poem a lot! great work! robin |
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