Teen Poetry #5 |
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jeers and cheers |
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sad brown eyes Junior Member
since 2001-12-14
Posts 19Connecticut U.S |
For so long i was blue. But then i met you. At first i was holding back my love for you but, i couldnt because i really love you. I mean my feelingzare like a rose starting to bloom. It keeps growing and growing and i dont know what to do. I mean, i cant bare to lose you. Your my world, my life the reason i live. We also had our bad times and i know that. But i promise, no more of that. No more angryness or tears. Its all about jeers and cheers. renee |
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Marshalzu![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great work, I really enjoyed the read, hope to read more of your work in the future. ![]() Zu "No army can conquer a galaxy, yet faith alone can overturn the universe" |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Aww very cute poem!!! ![]() ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
very sweet indeed ![]() là où est mon amour? |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Isn't it amazing how one person can make such a difference in one's life? ![]() I enjoyed this, as always... very sweet! --Marie If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway. |
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prov1717 Member
since 2001-12-26
Posts 74NE |
i too enjoyed this very much, it makes me think of the people i love and how much they mean to my life, i'm glad you have someone like that! |
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