Teen Poetry #5 |
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Lisa_bebe15 Member
since 2001-11-15
Posts 151Florida ![]() |
I sit here and wonder what you are doing while I sit here in class and you are home working from a computer. It gets really hard sometimes but I know I can go on with you in my heart, is how I go on each day your love means so much to me. I sometimes wish you wernt homeschooled that I could see you in school, and hug you when I am down when I am sad, I can turn to you. But, I dont think you are comming back until the next morning when I can hold you like it was yesterday and we never said goodbye. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ My boyfriend Jeffy is homeschooled. Somedays, his going home hurts me so much that I can only cry and think of him to get comfort. Its been three months..and still going strong "Water Over Matter" |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Aww hun this is so sad...but i firmly believe everything happens for a reason. Now that he's not by you whenever you need him..it makes the time you do spend all that much more valuable ![]() ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Very sad piece but I like it a lot keep up the awsome work. Lauren "I just needed someone to talk to you were just to busy with yourself."-Staind |
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Belle19 Junior Member
since 2001-12-17
Posts 19California |
Very good I liked it, everything will be okay... Just stay strong and everything will be okay!! Great poem.. Keep up the good work! |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL |
This was sad, but very good. nice job It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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