Teen Poetry #5 |
Dreams |
Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
Dreams One of my dreams is to walk without a walker To be able to walk like the rest of the world My legs don’t do what I want them to do That makes me feel bad I wish I could do more then sit in this chair of mine I know I can play sports Will my dream ever come true? Minna July 6, 2001 |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
oh i think this is so good and i hope your dream comes true story of my life: I am so self destructive, I turn solutions into problems. Everything i touch i ruin. Im midas in reverse |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Hopefully your dream will come true this is a great peom keep up the awsome work! Lauren |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Great poem! I hope your dream comes true. - Cody - |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
all dreams can come true if you really work hard. like they say if there's a will... there's a way! and i think you have all the will power in the world so keep reachin girl! Valerie "...And i want to take you down, but your soul could not be found, doesn't matter much you see cause your disease is killing me..." -Saliva |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Minna- this made my eyes water... So many poeple talk things for granted... I hope your dream comes true Sweetie. I enjoyed the read. |
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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
My younger sister and her friends take it for granted. It hurts when they go out of to the beach, they take alot of things for granted like their weight they can gain all they want I can't. I'd love to become friends with alot of you email me at heavensangel200283@hotmail.com IM me SmileyMmT83 Bye, ~*~Min~*~ Some people come into our lives and go quickly. Some people stay for awhile and leave footprints on our hearts. We are never ever the same. |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
i added you to my b/l on aim....my s/n is PowderPuffGirl2k if you ever need to talk.....nice poem again story of my life: I am so self destructive, I turn solutions into problems. Everything i touch i ruin. Im midas in reverse |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Minna, this is another well written, heart felt poem. You're such a strong person, with a great frame of mind. I think you can do anything when you set your mind to it I have faith in you. Nice work, here. I really enjoyed this... Keep your head up, stay strong, and smile --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this truly emotionally touched me...in eyes..*sighs*...i also have a wish..hoping one day it might come true...this was beautiful yet sad Minna. [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 07-07-2001).] |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Nicely done. This poem was wonderful. I hope that one day your dream will come true, but at least you have one more thing that you will never take for granted now. *Amanda* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I hope it does Minna....keep working hard and it will happen I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Minna, you can do whatever you want to do. With your determination I believe that in the end you wil achieve things you never thought possible. Good luck to you. ~AF~ Never speak disrespectfully of Society. Only people who can't get into it do that. |
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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
thank u for all ur replys.....i will reach my dream someday.. Some people come into our lives and go quickly. Some people stay for awhile and leave footprints on our hearts. We are never ever the same. |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
This was an amazing poem, I cannot say I know how you feel because that would be untrue but this was a very emotional poem and I enjoyed it very much!! ^*~Kicking Kim~*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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Hill's_Chatabox Junior Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 46USA |
Hey girl, I really hope your dreams come true, If you keep your mind set to what you want to do I believe that anything is possible. So good luck. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You can set your goals as high as you want to. You are a very strong girl Minna. But remember, being able to finally walk does not make you who you truly are. You're a wonderful person with a lot of heart, and that will never change. *hugs* hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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