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Ski*Chick
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0 posted 2001-07-06 01:45 PM


Dreams
One of my dreams is to walk without a walker
To be able to walk like the rest of the world
My legs don’t do what I want them to do
That makes me feel bad
I wish I could do more then sit in this chair of mine
I know I can play sports
Will my dream ever come true?
Minna
July 6, 2001



© Copyright 2001 Minna - All Rights Reserved
DarkAngelOfTheStars
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1 posted 2001-07-06 03:42 PM


oh i think this is so good and i hope your dream comes true  

story of my life: I am so self destructive, I turn solutions into problems. Everything i touch i ruin. Im midas in reverse

TopGunLauren
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2 posted 2001-07-06 06:09 PM


Hopefully your dream will come true this is a great peom keep up the awsome work!
  Lauren

CwboyAtHeart
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3 posted 2001-07-06 06:21 PM


Great poem!  I hope your dream comes true.

      - Cody -

If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

~sugarpie313~
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4 posted 2001-07-06 06:35 PM


all dreams can come true if you really work hard. like they say if there's a will... there's a way! and i think you have all the will power in the world so keep reachin girl!

Valerie

"...And i want to take you down, but your soul could not be found, doesn't matter much you see cause your disease is killing me..." -Saliva

Spice
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5 posted 2001-07-06 08:35 PM


Minna- this made my eyes water...
So many poeple talk things for granted...
I hope your dream comes true Sweetie.
I enjoyed the read.

Ski*Chick
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6 posted 2001-07-06 08:59 PM


My younger sister and her friends take it for granted. It hurts when they go out of to the beach, they take alot of things for granted like their weight they can gain all they want I can't. I'd love to become friends with alot of you email me at heavensangel200283@hotmail.com IM me SmileyMmT83 Bye, ~*~Min~*~

Some people come into our lives and go quickly. Some people stay for awhile and leave footprints on our hearts. We are never ever the same.

DarkAngelOfTheStars
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7 posted 2001-07-06 10:00 PM


i added you to my b/l on aim....my s/n is PowderPuffGirl2k if you ever need to talk.....nice poem again  

story of my life: I am so self destructive, I turn solutions into problems. Everything i touch i ruin. Im midas in reverse

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8 posted 2001-07-06 10:14 PM


Minna, this is another well written, heart felt poem.  You're such a strong person, with a great frame of mind.  I think you can do anything when you set your mind to it   I have faith in you.  Nice work, here.  I really enjoyed this... Keep your head up, stay strong, and smile  

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

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9 posted 2001-07-07 03:14 PM


this truly emotionally touched me...in eyes..*sighs*...i also have a wish..hoping one day it might come true...this was beautiful yet sad Minna.

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10 posted 2001-07-07 03:18 PM


Nicely done.  This poem was wonderful.   I hope that one day your dream will come true, but at least you have one more thing that you will never take for granted now.  

*Amanda*
I need more time to find the real me...
to fly like the birds... to be set free.

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11 posted 2001-07-09 12:15 PM


I hope it does Minna....keep working hard and it will happen  

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymousfemale
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12 posted 2001-07-10 03:09 AM


Minna, you can do whatever you want to do. With your determination I believe that in the end you wil achieve things you never thought possible. Good luck to you.  

~AF~

Never speak disrespectfully of Society. Only people who can't get into it do that.
~ Oscar Wilde ~

Ski*Chick
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13 posted 2001-07-10 03:35 AM


thank u for all ur replys.....i will reach my dream someday..

Some people come into our lives and go quickly. Some people stay for awhile and leave footprints on our hearts. We are never ever the same.

Kicking Kim
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14 posted 2001-07-10 10:30 AM


This was an amazing poem, I cannot say I know how you feel because that would be untrue but this was a very emotional poem and I enjoyed it very much!!

^*~Kicking Kim~*^  

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

Hill's_Chatabox
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15 posted 2001-07-10 01:14 PM


Hey girl, I really hope your dreams come true, If you keep your mind set to what you want to do I believe that anything is possible. So good luck.
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16 posted 2001-07-19 10:47 PM


You can set your goals as high as you want to.  You are a very strong girl Minna.  But remember, being able to finally walk does not make you who you truly are.  You're a wonderful person with a lot of heart, and that will never change. *hugs*

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare

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