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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
LMAO! YAAAY! I was asked out by this girl I REALLY like...at pretty much the same time I was gonna ask her out! So...this one's for you Jackie!!! Mystery Girl- From the depths of darkness, I lift my head up high... And I realize...I should've done this sooner! Because I see your beautiful eyes watching me! From all eternity, My hopes and dreams are reborn... Giving me a new meaning to live, Making me smile with every word you speak... From the depths of my immagination, Mystery Girl...did you really come from heaven? Why is everything about you flawless? How can it be you that brings me so much happines? ----------- This is one of my shortest...and I think the ending isn't that great...but it's the thought that counts! Hmmm...this might even be considered WIP (Work In Progress). If I repost this...then it'll be the complete version! This one's for Jackie!!! ~ Alex My name is Alex...I don't go looking for trouble---but when it finds me, I fight back! [This message has been edited by Android 17 (edited 12-07-2001).] |
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babygurl * Junior Member
since 2001-12-07
Posts 30 |
Hey babe! that poem was really sweet! ive seriously never gotten poetry from anyone before! i really liked it...you are so talented! and im really glad i am going out with you!! bye hun! |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
Aaaaaw! You're making me blush!!! I mean it!!! You've never gotten poetry form anyone? Well...that's about to change!!! Me...talented...? If you say so... And I'm glad to be going out with you too sweety! Hey...what's a lovley young lady have to get a proper welcome around here?! acire, Dopey_Dope, SEA, vlraynes, cherish, xShUgArHiGhx, General Alert---were are you?!!! My name is Alex...I don't go looking for trouble---but when it finds me, I fight back! [This message has been edited by Android 17 (edited 12-07-2001).] |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
Nice poem, I thought Id replied before but i guess not. I think |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Ah beautiful Alex. This is a pretty short one from you but as promised, I came and took a look.  It really is nice and I hope you have a lot of success with this chicka.  ~AF~ Why does Sea World have a seafood restaurant? I'm halfway through my fish burger and I realize, Oh my gosh....I could be eating a slow learner. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Alex, this is a very pretty piece. Uh oh.. is someone in love? This is obviously a very special person to you. Don't let go of that. Well done.--Marie If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway. |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
welcome Jackie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  [This post has been created by Alyssa, be joyous she has graced you with her pressence!!!] |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
OMG THIS WHOLE THING IS SO CUTE!!! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
So many questions I see? Is it maybe cause you're really attracted to the girl. Every little thing about her becomes so beautiful you just can't explain thanks for the beautiful read là où est mon amour? |
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