Teen Poetry #5 |
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I don't wanna go crazy |
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Poet Unknown Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 140Missouri |
Where would I be without you? What would I do? Got my mind all hazy, And I dont wanna go crazy. Thinking constantly of you, Always to you I stay true. You know I'd die if you weren't with me, How much love wish you could see. So far apart yet close in heart, Somehow I knew it from the very start. Make my mind all lazy, And I don't wanna go crazy. Tear for a tear eye for an eye, Why do we have to be so far away why? I see a ship in the bay, Walk to you all that way. And I don't wanna go crazy. Keep you warm on those cold dark nights, Hold you close and turn off the lights. I don't wanna go crazy, So give me all yours baby. And together we can make it safely, And I won't have to go crazy. Do as you please....strike forth down upon your knees...Darkness Falls on Those Without Souls |
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Alyssa![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
Hey!! i really really liked this first poem i read tonight...good way to start out LOL love it! If at first you don't succeed, destroy all evidence that you tried. |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Very sweet... sentiment is always a good thing (: Enjoyed, as always! --Marie If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Very sweet poem I liked it keep up the great work. Lauren |
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Lisa_bebe15 Member
since 2001-11-15
Posts 151Florida |
Very nice..I enjoyed reading that. Keep up the good work :P "Water Over Matter" |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
really sweet poem, vey much enjoyed thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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PoetryIsLife![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Very nice! I have to say I liked it! ![]() Titus |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
I like the way this read, Kyle. You always did write well. ![]() The repetition worked well. I hope you don't go crazy with this girl. ![]() Thanks for sharing. It's good to see you again. ~AF~ "When I eat I feel. It is better if I don't feel, I am too afraid." - Ellen West |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This kinda reminds me of a song lol i dunno so dont ask me why!! I liked it though..very cute ![]() ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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