Teen Poetry #5 |
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Harvesting For a New Moon |
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Knight of Secrecy Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 113San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Harvesting For a New Moon give back what you stole from me it wasn't my heart, for i know where it lays bleeding... drowning in my blood you didn't steal my heart f you have given it back you have stolen my illusion, you stole... my ability to dream my coherence died with our relationship, Now all I write is bull****, like the things you said ... that echo in my being I just hope that someday I might see your face... of regret and despair, and know that this wheel took its turn, and finally be able to dream again, and lonely and vanished I may start to crawl, and the sun may strike my smile with its warmth... while My words keep sleeping, and harvesting for a new moon, another Midnight sun... I think the poem speaks for itself, my muse is gone. I can still write preety much but not in the way or style that I like. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
hey! theres two of them!! how bout that!! |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
i liked this alot. loved the last few lines and how it all worked together. its a nice concept. good job. tiff ![]() “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Nicely done..full of emotion! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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rolly_polly Junior Member
since 2001-10-10
Posts 41puerto rico |
Hey Humi!..i thought this was some nice work here, really felt the emotion on this one...hope everything is alright man..anyway as always it's good to read yer stuff, Don't stop posting. ![]() ~parallel universe~ |
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K. Rebel Junior Member
since 2001-10-21
Posts 40San Juan, PR |
Well Carlos, the poem is well written and a great concept, but I hate to say that not only are your writting bull your also talking a lot of bull man. Take the while you have left and quickly make something of it with her man. Anyways Great Poem as always. |
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