Teen Poetry #5 |
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I Love You. |
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gymnast Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 80Scotland. |
Why can't I seem to say Those simple little words In just the right way So you know that I... I reherse it in my mind Those words I want to say But time can never find A moment to say I... My palms are in a sweat I know what I have to do If my tongue would only let Me say I... I've wrote this poem down So I can show you How much I've frowned When I try to say I... I'm scared because it's true I've tried to give you clues That I've always really knew How much I Love You. |
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Lisa_bebe15 Member
since 2001-11-15
Posts 151Florida |
I loved that poem..I can relate to that poem..Keep up the good work! "Water Over Matter" |
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DawnG![]() ![]()
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
This poem is something everyone can relate to at least sometime in their life. Thanks for sharing. Dawn |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I hope you do get the courage to say it don't let time pass you by thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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Knight of Secrecy Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 113San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I like this poem a lot. I can relate, it is always a difficult thing with the person you know that is special. I guess that's what they call love, or maybe fear, it actually has been a torment of mine with the relationship I am now. Good poem here. -C.M. |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
OMG this was sooo sweet!!! Not only was the whole theme of the poem one that *everyone* can relate to, but the way you wrote it was awesome 2!! I loved how you ended each line with I.... as if you were actually starting to say it but paused. Great use of repetition. This is awesome work, I'm adding it 2 my library!! Hope 2 see more from you soon!! ![]() ![]() *~Fighting for your love~* |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I think this was a creative way to write it... the way you trailed off with I... at each stanza was creative. Nicely done! I enjoyed it, and can't wait to read more ![]() --Marie If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway. |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
o wow, i really liked this one, it wuz kewl......lots of emotion in it.....great display of them 2.....thanks 4 the read! bye ![]() ~i, i feel so alive, 4 the very 1st time, i cant deny u, and i think i could fly!~P.O.D. |
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