Teen Poetry #5 |
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-Myriad- New Member
since 2001-11-24
Posts 6Canada |
Winter grows within the silent world A dream through rayments of ice. Snow falls gently from above And stirs the frail world into endless dreams. Once, time posessed a memory Betrayed by its existence Forgotten now, eternal lost Looking back Only ebony. And night, reflecting light as falling glass, Was broken by the sound of distant footsteps. -Myriad- Infinitum... |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
wow i liked this alot. very nicely done. you did a great job on it. º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤º°¤Welcome to Passions°º¤ø,¸¸,ø¤º tiff “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Myriad, This is a great poem. Thank you for sharing it with us. Welcome to Passions. I hope you enjoy your stay here with us as much as we will enjoy having you. Please check your e mail for a special message. Dawn |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
Myriad, I see Myriad amounts of potential in your poetic skill. WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! (boy I love saying that) This work leaves me a warm feeling |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
A poem with true beauty. The way you expressed this was wonderful. You wrote this quite well. I look forward to more of your work. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
you have a lot of talent and i look forward to reading more of your work and watching you develop more as a poet. you use some really beautiful images in this, i liked it a lot. keep posting your work, and keep replying as well. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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