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Lisa_bebe15
Member

since 2001-11-15

Posts 151
Florida

0 posted 2001-11-23 10:13 PM

Look into my eyes..

Can you see all the hurt?
the pain?
the neglect?

If you can't, I don't know what you see.

This is my life..
not your'es.
Let me live my life, day by day
and you live yours, how you want to live it

I don't need your help
I am not a baby, but I do need help.
I need a ear for someone to listen to me
I need a hand for someone to show me
I need a shoulder for me to lean on
I need a heart for someone to love me

I am a teenager
not a child
I do need help
but not to walk across the street and Eat!

I tell you this, because I am in need of a friend
a friend who will love me and not let me down

Are you that friend?

No I hear? I didnt think so.
You have you're own life
your own pain

To busy for me?

I understand.

Everyone else has a life, but me.
I sit and watch other peoples lives,
never ny own life
What I say is true, not a myth

Remember me, for that I have done
not who I was

Do not weep for I am gone,
I will remain within your heart and soul.
I will not be missed by those who didnt love me
unless they truely felt love for me

My last words of wisdom are-
Water Over Matter!

"Water Over Matter"

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

1 posted 2001-11-23 11:21 PM

Lisa,

This is a very sad poem. I used to feel the exact same way you do. If you need a friend, please feel free to e mail me and I'll be happy to listen. I hope things get better for you soon.

Dawn

Jimmy_Fallon
New Member

since 2001-11-16

Posts 3
Selah , Washington

2 posted 2001-11-24 03:04 AM

Wow lisa
I know exactly how you feel it totally hit close to home and I loved the poem I really really hope things get better for you

"...but what I hate the most is that I don't hate you... not even a little bit... not even at all"

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

3 posted 2001-11-24 10:14 PM

Your poems remind me a lot of my own and the subjects I have been writting about lately especially this one.This is thr first poem I've read on here that I'm actually putting in my library.I know exactly what you are going through and if you ever need someone to talk to you can always e-mail me.Keep up the awsome work.
Lauren

Jessica

Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

4 posted 2001-11-24 10:23 PM

Lisa~
This is great. The main point of a poem is to get across how you feel, and I think you did that very well. I have certainly been in your shoes before. Keep your head up - you are not a child. Same goes for me as everyone else... if you ever need me, email me. I am on yahoo and aim too.

Email: [email protected]
Yahoo: jwd_8
AIM: jesa312

SunShine913

Member

since 2001-08-19

Posts 211
Italy but from NC

5 posted 2001-11-25 08:44 PM

Lisa~!
i really liked this poem it hit me at home but i do want to say that i think .. you need someone to talk to im here no matter what..ok .. well here is my [email protected]

*!~!* Andrea *!~!*

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-11-30 06:57 PM

"Everyone else has a life, but me.
I sit and watch other peoples lives,
never ny own life
What I say is true, not a myth"

don't concentrate yourself on others lives, watch your own
i hope things get better
the last lines got to me too
pls don't do anything you might regret
thanks for sharing
hoping things do wrok out for you

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

7 posted 2001-11-30 08:59 PM

I feel like I could relate to this so well...I've felt this same way, and it's not a happy situation to be in. I still feel this way often, and sometimes I don't know what to do. But I've searched high and low and found some great friends that I know I can talk 2 that will really listen. Having somebody like that helps, and if you don't have anyone like that, feel free to E-mail me [email protected] or IM me on AIM nikkigrl2004 I hope things get better....

~*Nikki*~

     *~Fighting for your love~*
    *~Is something I cannot do~*
   *~I'm not good enough to win~*
*~And I'm not strong enough to lose~*

dreamer1 12 5 24
Member

since 2000-12-11

Posts 150
crossing between

8 posted 2001-12-01 12:25 PM

Wow. This was a beautiful poem. I think I know how you feel, or something close. Very well written. Thanks.

dreamer

The day is brighter, but the dawn is sweetest.

Anyone who thinks life is wonderful is going to be very disapointed when life takes off it's mask.

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

9 posted 2001-12-02 12:02 PM

I like what you have here, Lisa. You put your emotions down very well. I respect you for coming to terms with the situation, saying you won't allow anyone to push you around.

I enjoyed this.

--Marie

If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

10 posted 2001-12-03 01:56 PM

This was a really sad poem but i think that you expressed yourself really nicely here...great job and i hope they r that friend

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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