Teen Poetry #5 |
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If only (repost) |
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SunShine913![]()
since 2001-08-19
Posts 211Italy but from NC ![]() |
I can taste the heat of his lips on mine smoldering tongues entwine ~ I can feel his fingers stroke my skin Oh, baby touch me again ~ I can smell the musk of his cologne If only I wasn’t lying here all alone ________________ hey i know this is a repost but i love it lol~!!! *!~!* Andrea *!~!* |
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Android 17![]() ![]()
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
Haha! Very cool...and er---kinky! Hehehe! ^_^ Reminds me of my dates...minus the cologne parts! "Fighting was the only thing I was good at...but I at least I always fought for what I beleived in..." |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
ooo, that's a great poem!! I love that...but I hated the lying there alone part. LOL, simply because yer alone x_X and you were talkin about him...okay, I'm gonna shutup now, lol. *~*Love is the key that can unlock your happiness...to truly love, is to love yourself*~* |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
Aww the last line made me sad!! But you did really good, I don't think I read this one the first time around. ![]() ![]() *~Fighting for your love~* |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
loved the read, thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Ya,repost, Iknow I've read it before...LOL So might as welll take a second and tell ya how kick tooshie it is! LOL, I must say, this poem is short, simple, but keep my full attention each and every time I read it. ![]() "I'd rather die purposely alone than to have lived an accidental life of solitude."- Jesa "§ùgã®" Thompson |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
OoOOoO makes me all tingly inside lol ![]() ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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