Teen Poetry #5 |
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Promise Me You'll Stay |
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HeAvEnS AnGeL Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 168The Hot Girl From Canada |
Although I am far from perfect I'm beautiful to you, You say that I'm amazing While others say I'm cute. You compliment me on my looks But never tell me what I need to know, I want to know what you feel for me And if our relationship is going to grow. You whisper in my ear And tease me all the time, And all I want to know Is if you'll ever be mine! I've been hurt too many times One more I cannot take, So I need to know Is this for real or is it fake? All I want to know Is what you feel for me, I guess I am blind Can you please help me see? Please just say you'll hold me And never hate me if I cry, Love me when I'm misreable And still help me to get by. Please don't ever give up on me Please stick by my side, Remember that I may get sick And that this could be a bumpy ride. But I'll always be here for you Whatever come what may, As long as you can promise me That here is where you'll stay. Hey everyone. I havn't posted in awhile since no one read my last post ![]() ![]()
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since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
Wow! I really like this one...in fact, I'm gonna put it in my library! *sigh* You nail sooo many questions and good points when it comes to love. I've always wondered how to say what this poem says---and now...when I find myself still wondering...I'll think back to this. Thanks! And be sure to check out some of my work! "Fighting was the only thing I was good at...but I at least I always fought for what I beleived in..." |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Awsome poem it is very meaningful I love it and can relate to it.Keep up the awsome work I love this piece. Lauren |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
This is sooo good!!! I like it alot, and I can kinda relate. Maybe you should give the guy this poem, or else try 2 tell him in some other way what your feeling. Anyways, good luck!!! ![]() ![]() *~Fighting for your love~* |
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PoetryIsLife![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Great write! Loved it! ![]() Sincerely, Titus |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
Very good. And yes, do give the poem to the guy. Such words are sometimes best given with a gift, and poet has no better gift than a poem. -Adam "Diplomacy is the art of saying 'Nice Doggy' while you search for a rock." - Will Rogers |
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