Teen Poetry #5 |
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Anticipation Manipulation |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
Your formulated intentions all hiding plans of demise, a shielded vulnerability that I was left to surmise. You conquered protective walls by seizing my evaded trust, I deafened my own ears from words of barbed thrust. Hollow words and promises the naive would find sincere, to all of your empty requests I would faithfully adhere. You climbed upon your pedestal beaming with false pride, because little did you know my ignorance would subside. You glorified your madness while playing the role of moralistic, if only they could have seen your true form was sadistic. Your delusive self-righteousness was not without its own faults, degrading your words meaning and weakening your assaults. You only did it to yourself and I could see right through you, too late to make a fresh start though thats what you pursue. And now whats done is done your fate has now been sealed, I can come out of hiding since you have been revealed. ~Alicia Morris 11-21-01 Liefhe alle ten spijte van duivel... A tes souhaits... A tes amours... Qu ils restent. J'ai t'adore. Je t'aime. |
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Android 17![]() ![]()
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
WOAH!!! THIS IS SOOOOOO GOOD! I LOVE IT!!! I ESPECIALLY love the lines: You glorified your madness while playing the role of moralistic, if only they could have seen your true form was sadistic. ----------- Haw-haw-haw! I love it!!! WOW!!! "Fighting was the only thing I was good at...but I at least I always fought for what I beleived in..." |
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Jessica![]()
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
This is AWESOME!! I love your way of fitting complicated words together forming a very clear message. I related to this piece soo much. I could feel everything you were saying. I certainly hope to see more of your work soon. Keep up the wonderful writing! What don't kill you can only make you stronger... [This message has been edited by Jessica (edited 11-22-2001).] |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
Like I said in my e-mail, this poem simply rocks. Everything about it is wonderful Ali. Love it lots kiddo. -Adam |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
I love the word play in this piece. I can only assume what the 'event' behind this piece was, which was I'm guessing your intent in vaugeness. But what a wonderful writing. Well done. Quod me nutrit me destruit. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
a lot of anger on this one it's good to fight back thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
![]() Liefhe alle ten spijte van duivel... A tes souhaits... A tes amours... Qu ils restent. J'ai t'adore. Je t'aime. |
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