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Love Hurts(And I'd Know)
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Love Hurts(And I'd Know) |
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gymnast Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 80Scotland. |
When you get that feeling, You’re soaring up high, Head in the clouds, Way up in the sky. The feeling got broken, Along with my heart, He ran away and left me, For some other tart. He asked if I loved him, And said to speak true, I even had the guts To say that I do. When he didn’t reply, With “yes so Do I,” I knew it was over, And I fell from the sky. The next day he told me, And he spoke it true, He didn’t love me, And this much I knew. Still I did love him, And still broke my heart, That horrible boyfriend, And his stupid tart. I cried all night long, And all through the day, Till slowly I realised, I’d wasted away. It’s not worth the hassle, They’re just all the same, Each horrible players, In the stupid Love game! |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
WOOOO HOOOOO!!! You go girl. I loved this LMAO...it's like a kick arse nursery rhyme!!  Loving it!!!Jenn "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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luckyducky_505 Member
since 2001-04-29
Posts 53Kentucky, USA |
I really, really loved this. It is soooo true!!! I wrote anew poem almost like that on a letter just a day ago and it was awesome!! He was sooo stunned!! Keep it going!! If you wanna be somebody, If you wanna go somewhere, you gotta wake-up and pay attention. ~Sister Act 2~ |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
Okay, I just couldn't help but laugh at the whole "tart" thing. Lol, I'm easily amused obviously. But I like the message, and the poem itself was good. Liefhe alle ten spijte van duivel... A tes souhaits... A tes amours... Qu ils restent. J'ai t'adore. Je t'aime. |
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NathanS Member
since 2001-09-27
Posts 106CA |
This was a really excellntly written poem, i must say. *Applauds* But as a note, not all guys are players. I myself am not. When i told my girlfriend that i loved her (I said it to her and also gave her a poem) she didn't say that she loved me write after that. I waited, then eventually she did say so. But the lasy thing i would do is be a player. So, remember, not all guys are players  although some unfortunately are and there the ones that give the bad names to the rest of us.-Dreys p.s. good write, im adding it to the library |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Stand uo for yourself, that's the way to do it Hey, not lal guys are bad, look at me lolhope things do work out next tiem for you thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Love can definately suck at times..i feel for ya..::hugs:: ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
gymnast- You've done a great job of expressing your frustration and hurt. I like the bold voice of this. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
*hugs* Very hard situation. But just remember... love is not always returned, and if it isn't, then that's ok. It doesn't have to be. Just loving the person is beautiful enough. Well done, I like the flow and rhyme scheme throughout this piece. I hope to see more soon. --Marie If there's one thing I've learned, it's that the most frustrated people in the world are those who know they're stupid, but keep trying anyway. |
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