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K. Rebel Junior Member
since 2001-10-21
Posts 40San Juan, PR |
Running threw the aisles of disbelief trying to find some truth in this world, Dropping to this ground of shame, losing myself threw the small minded. Feeling as if I where the toy of the moment, as if I where a game to amuse, Strangely losing my mind to the hell of words that consume me. Lost in the battlefield of hope, in my infinite boredome for evermore, Regreting the love I felt for her, Releasing myself from the pain of my heart. Hoping the best of my future, while I moan in my past, Trying to find my path to the Sun, while I drown in my misery. Mariola my conversation with you inspired me on this one |
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rolly_polly Junior Member
since 2001-10-10
Posts 41puerto rico |
Hey danny! nice poem man, just remeber to keep yer head up, you will be fine, i promise...just like i said live your life for tomorrow we die....so you just gotta keep at it.  ~parallel universe~ |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
...yea... i share your feelings... many times I share these feelings with you |
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Knight of Secrecy Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 113San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This is a good poem, the best I have seen from you I think. "When everything else fails, when you get to the bottomless pit, the only place to go, is up" O como dice "Carpe Diem baby" de una tremenda banda, "So wash your face away with dirt It don't feel good until it hurts So take this world and shake it come squeeze and suck the day Come make me miss you Come carpe diem baby" -C.M. "I feel the sting of an insignificant wasp, and yet, I fear that I am alergic" |
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