Teen Poetry #5 |
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i dwell |
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ryun Junior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 33elsinore, ca, usa |
I find my self walking upside down up and down out the valleys in despare.. Nowher I can't find her blind, buiried, and weekened She speaks and then I think again Contaplating everything lost in that weekend.. Expectations.. what was I thinkin why, when will this come to me.. Contentment.. with my thoughts our energys healin Spendin so much time in my head my speach wrapped confused Whats said then reread while I lay in bed, what todo.. For some reason after this weekend the seasons change.. Freazin the frame changin my mid action to lonely deranged.. anger'd by my self I can't help but torture I dwell.. Waiting by the telephone I can't help myself I just kill myself, alone.. I dwell.. Do I wanna sit alone over whelmed by thought i don't know wher to go no wher to turn.. Reawakened burried and burned The distance tortures we have much to learn Am I confusion walking on emotions stretching ever so thin unconditional doesn't bend just struggles to the end.. I walk with in my self and find no end no begining infinitly condemed set aside from my self on that weekend I felt so alone Not knowin what, when, wher to go what to think.. On the inside I dream torturing fantacys is it what it seems.. Or fables manifested from my hopes and dreams I end at the night and may awake when I see guided by my visions awaking when I see.. |
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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
Part of it was hard to read but from what i could understand of it it was rather good i guess i liked it because i senced a feeling of lonelyness somthing to identify with i guess (not to say i'm a good speller....) from me =D as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u. |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
I definitely sensed the same sort of lonliness that sleepymoongirl did. I hope that things clear up for you and that you nolonger "dwell" on whatever it is you have written about. ![]() ![]() ~*I'd rather you hate me for what I am than love me for what I'm not.*~ |
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Alyssa![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
wow i liked this even though it was kinda hard to read because of the spelling. But i enjoyed it! I LuV 2 fReAk out saLEpeEpZ. ThEy AsK me If tHey CaN heLp Me, & I sAy,'HaVe U gOT NEthINg Id like?'TheN thEy aSk mE wuT sIZe I sAy "X-tr MedIuM" |
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