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Taking my life back
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Taking my life back |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
This is to all you people who think you are too cool, Guess what you aren't. If you think I don't care anymore, For once you are right about something. You thought I would always be strong for you, Now you have to be strong for yourselves. Who's going to be there to listen to all your problems? All I know is it's not my problem anymore. And who is going to buy you things when you have no money? Because I'm no longer going to be your bank. Well I guess your life is about to get complicated quickly, But who's fault is that? I was so good to you and you treated me like I was nothing, So now I'm giving you a taste of your own medicine! Lauren |
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Missthang Member
since 2001-07-03
Posts 103 |
wow! this one was filled with a lot of emotion. i honestly feel like telling some people the exact same thing. it's like...all i do for you and this is how you treat me. but then agian doing things for others isn't always a bad thing. you just have to balance yourself and others out. anyhoo, i really liked this one. is was direct and to the point and i can relate to it all to well. i just don't have the strength to actually do it. good post. ab "Whatever you are doing, love yourslef for doing it. |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
YOU GO LAUREN!!!!!!!!!!! Girl what an awesome poem!! You really show strength in this one, im proud of you for standing up for yourself!! YAY!!! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Lauren, This is great. Congrats on taking your life back. Dawn |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
OOOOOOOOOOOOOH!....well said lauren! sometimes you just have to take a stand on ppl treating you like dirt. good piece lauren  |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
Lauren, It sounds like you've let people walk all over you and take advantage of you, and I admit I've let ppl do that 2 me alot 2. But it's good that you're not gonna let that happen anymore, and you're gonna stand up 4 urself. I wish I had enough strengh to do that!   ~*Nikki*~~*I'd rather you hate me for what I am than love me for what I'm not.*~ |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Nice poem. I liked it, I can totally relate to this at times in my life. Hope things go well. Jon "Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur |
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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
wow i'm sorry for whoever did this to you.... but the poem was good direct from me =D |
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lilibeelee Member
since 2001-07-12
Posts 143 |
I likey |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
QUEEN LAUREN!!! lol...man, what a arse kicking last verse...i liked it, overall. [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 11-16-2001).] |
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Lisa_bebe15 Member
since 2001-11-15
Posts 151Florida |
Thats really good..I like how you use words..I can only write love and depessing poems..Keep up the good work! |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
"Who's going to be there to listen to all your problems? All I know is it's not my problem anymore." thats like my favorite part...well expressed yet totally like somthing youd say everyday (not to complicated...not to simple..jus ri...LOL) I like this poem ...i likey a bunchy! I LuV 2 fReAk out saLEpeEpZ. ThEy AsK me If tHey CaN heLp Me, & I sAy,'HaVe U gOT NEthINg Id like?'TheN thEy aSk mE wuT sIZe I sAy "X-tr MedIuM" |
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