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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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Time to inhale the freah air exhale the staleness it has to be the time to let go to forgive, to get well Time to understand I don't have a story to tell i don't need to speak my past because its all finished I'm nearing the 15 year mark Its time to get over everything smile for my friends the sun is back the clouds are in the distance I don't expect no sadness because im not perfect just human im just a girl young, free and wild Regina Levy 2001 |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Ina, it's been forever since I've got to read something from you. This one was nice. Seems a whole lot happier than before, that's cool.I didn't feel this was as good as alot of your work.It's still good, don't get me wrong. But, I know you can do alot better. Sorry to sound so negative. Jon "Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur |
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Missthang Member
since 2001-07-03
Posts 103 |
i like. it's nice to see a positive outlook on things. it's good to expect the good but you just can't push the bad away. sometimes i wish i could start a new beginning and start over fresh. i feel like i'm rambling so i'm just going to stop now. ab *The heart is a house for love* |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This is a refreshing piece!!! Its nice to see your work around here again Regina..  ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
indeed, refreshing...and well, its YOU! missed reading your pieces...i think you have set your mind in the right path. i enjoyed the poem LOTS. =) |
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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
your poem has a positive out look which to me is refreshing for it is somewhat different from how i write i liked it =D |
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SunShine913
since 2001-08-19
Posts 211Italy but from NC |
i liked this work.. pleaseeeeeeeeeee keep it up~! *!~!* Andrea *!~!* |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Once again, INA! You're poems are so wonderful to read upon my venture back into passions.... |
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Lisa_bebe15 Member
since 2001-11-15
Posts 151Florida |
I really like it..i can only write love things..and I can never get into the mood..I enjoy getting ideas from other ppl..and you just helped me |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
nice to see your more positive outlook in life good for you Ina *hugs* keep em coming là où est mon amour? |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Ina, I don't know your other work to compare this to, so I have to say I like this a lot. Dawn |
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