Teen Poetry #5 |
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Addicted |
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K. Rebel Junior Member
since 2001-10-21
Posts 40San Juan, PR |
Crawling into darkness, Only to find my heart, Crying threw and threw, And weeping only for you, I found myself lost, Never to be found, East of love and west of you. This is rather a crazy poem i just wrote out of nowhere comparing cocaine to love.... there equally addictive to my belief. |
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Knight of Secrecy Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 113San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Ohh, my god the cocaine addict came out of the closet.LOL. good poem here -C.M. |
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allie Member
since 2001-07-09
Posts 218Australia |
That was really great... loved the last line summed it all up so well... Great poem |
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PoetryIsLife![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
That has to be one of the best poems I've read on pip. Beautiful imagarey, vived pictures and word choice. Honestly, I'm at a loss for words! Loved the last line as well. Loved it all! Absolutely a great poem. Sincerely, Titus "....this time I was mistaken for handing you a heart worth breaking." Nickelback |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Short and sweet...great job!!! I enjoyed it a lot and i liked how you managed to pack a lotta meaning into a few lines..it makes it more effective that way ![]() ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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