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krystlebabe19
Junior Member

since 2001-11-09

Posts 27

0 posted 2001-11-10 09:34 PM

This was the first poem, Ive ever written.. so it would be great if you guys could tell me what you think. Thanx

Is it worth it
all the heartaches
and tears

Is it worth it
all those memories
and suviners

Is it worth it
all the huges
and kisses

Is it worth it
all the fights
and disagreements

Is it worth it
all the romantic moments
you could jsut hold on to forever

Is it worth it
the way he looks in your eyes
and nothing eles in the world seems to matter

Then you ask yourself

IS IT REALLY WORTH IT?

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

1 posted 2001-11-10 11:33 PM

YES!!!! It is worth it! This is a very good poem about the way most people feel after they've had a breakup or six

It is definately worth it! Very good write here! Thanks for sharing! Definately into my library.

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Knight of Secrecy
Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 113
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-11-10 11:38 PM

I think its a good piece, not to critizice but I guess some letter spellings passed your eye, but in total the poem is nice.

P.S. I believe it would be worth it if the person is the right person.

-C.M.

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

3 posted 2001-11-11 12:04 PM

Great poem but you never really no if it matters.But anyway I loved this poem and keep up the awsome work.
Lauren

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

4 posted 2001-11-11 02:08 AM

I enjoyed this piece. It was simple, yet it asked the question it was meant to: is it worth it? I think with the right person, it's worth more then one's life, a love so deep. While it could have flowed a bit smoother, a good first write. Keep it up!

Sincerely,
Titus

"....this time I was mistaken for handing you a heart worth breaking." Nickelback

"Old Men Love While Young Men Die" Kipling

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2001-11-13 01:43 PM

Well for the first poem you've ever written this was very good! And an answer to your question would definately be YES! Some say it is better to have loved than lost then never to have loved at all..now if you agree with that statement then every moment of love wether it be heartache, smiles, giggles or tears is well worth it..but if you dont agree with it i still think that its worth it because you never know what will happen

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

sleepymoongirl
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 157
bc canada

6 posted 2001-11-13 03:34 PM

that poem was really cool and just a moment of happiness is worth the world =) good job from me

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