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Innocent Enemy
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Innocent Enemy |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733
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Sever the last shred No longer can I be polite Nauseated at the thought of you Curse you when out of sight What's your -in problem? Can you just leave me alone How can you do this to me? If only I could hit you If only no one would care Four letter words no longer suffice Anger needs something more than air Words seem to bounce off Penetrate deep into my subconscious Where they lie, until called upon To bring me down once again My body aches with over exertion Simple result of self-doubt My hands shake and my consciousness dwindling Side effect of low self esteem Now sharp edges seem so appealing Glistening in crude polished glory Let out the pain release it Cover it up with a Band-Aid A predator from a lower form of life As if I am nothing more than you You prey upon my weakness But I know you knew Have no respect for me Initiate my unknowingly and unwillingly Sly and dumb behind my back The group of two, now three Said I was anorexic You call me “walking wall” Threaten to say more about me I think I’ve heard them all Your day will come, innocent enemy Your day will come P.S. This has nothing to do with suicide, or glorifying self-hatred, self-inflicted wounds, injuries, diseases, or sickness. I'm not glorifying anything, so don't assume. Beware of Ana, she is not your friend, nor will she ever be. Once she's enticed you into her disease, she'll never want to let you go. Hate her, fea [This message has been edited by Isabel Galaxia (edited 11-08-2001).] |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Wow! This is some incredible descriptional poetry. I could view all the events you told of so vividly and beautifully. This was a really well written poem! I'm very impressed! Theo |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
There's a lot of anger in this, but I like it very much. It sounds like this person has taken advantage of you emotionally, and that's definitely not an easy thing to deal with. I wish you luck.  ~*Nikki*~ ~*I'd rather you hate me for what I am than love me for what I'm not.*~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
The only thing to do with anger is let it go because bitterness will show up on your beautiful face one day, and you don't want that. I think you just let go of it in this poem Kathleen |
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