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A Thousand Roses
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A Thousand Roses |
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Le Capitan de L'Amour Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 60 |
Love like a thousand roses are the reason to live for "I thought!", but like the petals it just goes by. Sought then I thought to have a thousand roses for myself, I treated them good, but when fall came they all died and with each petal of love that fell I cried for the love I had lost again, but you the one of those thousand roses survived to give me the nectar I needed to live on, because I rather die than to live without your love!. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Your poem is very sweet I liked it keep up the great work! Lauren |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Very impressive! I like your use of the rose petals for imagery here! ~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!? |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I enjoyed how you used the rose petals as imagery here as well...nice piece... ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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