Teen Poetry #5 |
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after a lengthy "vacation"... |
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Attack Ferrit Junior Member
since 2001-04-09
Posts 41texas |
hi, its been a while sence ive posted last, so long in fact i almost forgot abut this place. but by a chance occurance i re-stumbled upon it so i thought id try my hand and post again. im a bit outta practice so i apologise in advance for any amount of suckatude. (untitled) the look that says “thanks for not sharing” something about sleeping in your own bed well i think you should jack will stay up waiting but he could stand some time alone when you come back around circle the city twice disappear into the clouds before you come home but i never was that nice the look that says “bridges are for jumping, put them to good use” something about running the country well i guess you could but jack will get jealous he ran up that hill to you know when you come back around look for signal flares touchdown and i’ll be waiting but i was never that fare so far from home something's are better left unsaid or so you say the look that says something true always gets ignored and there it is. please tell me what you think. thanks all. if we roast marshmellows over their bodies will their souls still go to heaven? |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Interesting poem I like it! Lauren |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Suckatude? LOL Anywho.. The poem was incredibly unique...It felt story like, yet...Had an elimate of poetry to it as well...Very different, very fresh. I'm highly intrigued by it actually...Loved the "Bridges are meant for jumping, put them to good use" line...The tone of this poem was awesome. Kudos to you- Glad to see a post from you. Perhaps you'll grace us with your presence a bit more?! Adios! -Jesa Every now and then I like to stick my foot in my mouth... |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Nice to see you back again!! Im glad you happened to stumble your way back in here ![]() ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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