Teen Poetry #5 |
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It Is Him |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
For his is the light that guides my soul as I search and plod, I am the only that can see he has walked where angels trod. For his is the voice that I hear calling my name in my dreams, his presence is my only comfort when nothing is what it seems. For his is the touch I seek when the stars shine in the sky, the gentleness he possesses is one I could never deny. For his is the comfort sent when my world falls apart, he picks up all the pieces and makes a brand new start. For his is the name I say when I count aloud my blessings, for he has mended my heart with care and gentle dressings. For his is the Love I treasure more than my life itself, for my sun rises and sets as he says he loves me himself. For his is the hand I'll take and pledge my undying love, for he is the one I will marry and become forever a part of. Liefhe alle ten spijte van duivel. |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Aww, that's sweet, Alicia! I'm very impressed with the way you kept your flow going throughout the entire poem! Way to go! ~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!? |
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allie Member
since 2001-07-09
Posts 218Australia |
thats really really sweet, enjoyed that one! Allie |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I really liked the repitition and the flow you used, the way it's written is much to my liking ![]() "Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato. |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
Woo! You rock Ali....Alex'll love this. -Adam "Diplomacy is the art of saying 'Nice Doggy' while you search for a rock." - Will Rogers |
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~gretchenp34~ Junior Member
since 2001-10-08
Posts 46Ohio, USA |
i like this one soooo much. it describes how i feel about my boyfriend!!!! great write. Love is like learning to play the piano. First you must learn to play by the rules, then you must forget the rules and play by your heart. |
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Alyssa![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
This is the poem i wanted to write!LOL i lov eit! 3 out of 5 computers bought today will be physically abused by their owners... |
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