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~gretchenp34~
Junior Member

since 2001-10-08

Posts 46
Ohio, USA

0 posted 2001-10-30 07:30 PM

I'll love you
now and forever
till the day I die.
Baby believe it,
why would I lie?

What I want
in my life
is to hold your hand
so that you can take me
to never-never land.

You look at me
with those eyes
those eyes that capture my heart.
Your eyes tell me
I've loved you from the start.

With candy kisses
and promises
that actually last,
you are better
than the guys of the past.

We are alone
no one else I see
I love you baby
and hopefully,
you love me.
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i dunno if ive posted this already or not. well, id say its my one of my fav. that ive ever written, so then i guess im just postin it again, or sharing it for the very first time....tell me what cha think!

Love is like learning to play the piano. First you must learn to play by the rules, then you must forget the rules and play by your heart.

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

1 posted 2001-10-31 12:12 PM

I like this one! You expressed hope for a good relationship and a good love very well in this one! Keep it up!

~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!?

~Love me because I am Rhonda

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

2 posted 2001-10-31 03:22 AM

I Like it.

Titus

"Old Men Love While Young Men Die" Kipling

[This message has been edited by PoetryIsLife (edited 10-31-2001).]

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

3 posted 2001-10-31 08:33 AM

Very sweet.

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2001-10-31 10:08 AM

Aww this is sweet!! I think you should give this to the person...

NICE JOB!!!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-10-31 01:03 PM

I thought you did a good job on expressing how you feel in this poem. Well done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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