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Rage and the Aftermath
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Rage and the Aftermath |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733
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Don't be mad or offended Craig, I love you Bel Sheer emotion surfacing Fear, anger, insecurity, anxiety Brought to light by the mention of a name That name, one name Causing immediate mood swings when uttered Even if not concerning her Fear, anger, insecurity, anxiety Newly surfaced, begging to be released Adrenaline slowly creeping, slowly heating my body I rip off my constraining shirt to let my muscles work free Violently assaulting the unsuspecting air All the while echoing the words, harsh angry screamed lyrics of Linkin Park Staring at my reflection staring back at me, dark hair swirling with every smooth deliberate punch Heat quickly fading, replaced by bitter cold Conversation pounding, that name pounding, your voice pounding in my poor unrested mind My hands running through my hair, my body suddenly numb I sink down kneeling, tears welling up in my eyes Singing in a strained raspy voice Suddenly the heat returns and I raise myself up, walking to the next room I ease myself onto my knees, onto the cold linoleum floor Raise my eyes to meet the glossy porcelain A sense of calm, tranquility, a sense of courage Envisioning my fear in front of me, I stare and wonder Debating, contemplating close my eyes and wait |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Good job  I enjoyed this..you expressed yourself nicely...ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Wow. Very emotional. Well placed anger and feelings. Great job.Jenn "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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