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Teen Poetry #5

I remain in nothing

K. Rebel
Junior Member

since 2001-10-21

Posts 40
San Juan, PR

0 posted 2001-10-29 05:53 PM

I remain in the solitude
Of my broken heart.
In that abyss where
I have hidden myself,
Lost of your untouchable love,
Without a soul to look over mine.

I remain ripped into two,
In a feeling I yet do not know,
Loneliness, lost forever
In nothing I can remember,
In the darkness that is my life,
Without a sense that comforts me.

I remain as nothing,
Awaiting the day of my death,
Awaiting the day I cease from existence.
With a black hole in my heart,
With no strength to pick me up,
Without a feeling that will arise me.

For you and only for you,
I will end with this burden
I call life,
Only to be forgotten, forever.

Knight of Secrecy
Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 113
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-10-29 06:09 PM

Very cool poem.

-C.M.

Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

2 posted 2001-10-29 06:12 PM

WOW this is a very powerful piece, one that i can relate to very nicely... keep your chin up and keep posting!
*Pixie*

Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

3 posted 2001-10-29 06:13 PM

oops.. i forgot to add it to my library before i posted my reply

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