Teen Poetry #5 |
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Zukene_Chic Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 152Cali ![]() |
I seem to have died Have you noticed? I lurk around the house Just as silently as a ghost Maybe I am dead Could it be? Thats normally what happens When you live long enough This one isnt so good. But if your smart, you'll get it. Take a guess at what the last line means! |
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Knight of Secrecy Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 113San Juan, Puerto Rico |
"Thats normally what happens When you live long enough" Truly a good poem, keep it up -C.M. |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
This one's good! Family problems? If you need someone to listen, I'm at [email protected] Love me, because I am great (greater than Zu, anyway!) |
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