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When will we learn
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When will we learn |
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Baby_Angel123 Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 63Unity, ME 
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When will we Learn When will we learn Violence is not the answer And a life is priceless When will we learn Lives are lost everyday And tears can be seen every witch way When will we learn This had got to stop Not one more life Not one more tear Not one more |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
You said it!!! I just can't believe the things my eyes have seen... we need to wake up and realize the true beauty in life and cherish it! No killings... no thoughtless hate... no rape.. ugh.. anywho.. I liked your poem... it has a GREAT message. There are always answers as long as you're open enough to accept the answers you were not looking for. |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
When WILL we learn? Kudos to you and your poem! If you define cowardice as running away, tripping and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward. |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
Exactly. But I guess the answer would have to be never sadly. Great message Oh, I hate doing this, but I think you meant to say "which" instead of "witch". Hate me if you want, but i had to say something  "and Death i think is no paranthesis"-e.e. cummings |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
AMEN!!! là où est mon amour? |
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